passionflower
Silver Member
Hi Jan I don't dislike the ribbon actually, I think maybe the reason you do not like the end result is because you have everything a bit to regimented across the front. For example close your eyes for 5 seconds then open them and look at your card then carefully monitor where your eyes are travelling, what can you see first, second, third etc. For me I start in the middle then look down to the right hearts, top right next,ribbon and top left hgearts and finally the last thing I look at is the bottom left. So by the time I finished I went a bit dizzy ish as my eyes travelled in a full circle across the page. This is a bit to much and also quite a few elements are repeating themselves. I would reduce the number of elements and group them together for a more coherent look. I also think your invites are a bit sombre a bit to much black. Unless you go very minimalist you might run the risk of making them look like funeral hymn sheets.
I have a post on wedding stationery HERE on my blog and some more example's HERE . I am happy to have a phone chat with you and advise on position all your bits on a the card in a few different layouts and see if you like them better. I do this for a living now and have been involved as a freelance papercraft tutor within the industry for the last 15 years, been published in quite a few magazines as well so one can say I amassed a bit of experience in this time. I think they would look lovely with a bit of tweaking and I am all for people doing as much as they can themselves, you do not need to spend lots of money to get the perfect look if you're a bit creative.xx
I have a post on wedding stationery HERE on my blog and some more example's HERE . I am happy to have a phone chat with you and advise on position all your bits on a the card in a few different layouts and see if you like them better. I do this for a living now and have been involved as a freelance papercraft tutor within the industry for the last 15 years, been published in quite a few magazines as well so one can say I amassed a bit of experience in this time. I think they would look lovely with a bit of tweaking and I am all for people doing as much as they can themselves, you do not need to spend lots of money to get the perfect look if you're a bit creative.xx
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